Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Adelia Holds out...

Hello - so I did a sketch of this for illustration friday - and I rather liked it...enough to clean it up and revise it and such.  I wanted to post it here to see if anyone had any suggestions for it before I went and colored it.  Well, hmmm?


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3 comments:

Candace Trew Camling said...

I really love the emotion in the eyes of the hungry little critters on the ground. I might like to see some little sprinkles or a cherry on the cupcakes, but otherwise it will make a lovely portfolio piece!

Isaac Marzioli - Freelance Illustrator said...

yeah - I'm going to add the sprinkle and texture to the cupcakes in photoshop...

Carmen Keys said...

I like the composition of this how it already is, too -- making the pillow guys at different angles and positions really helps to get a sense of depth. The one itty bitty thing I can see to watch out for is on the little bear pillow, where the line of the hill and the line of his coloring *almost* match up to make a continuous line. It will probably fix itself with color, but just wanted to alert you to it, and maybe make the line of the hill a tad higher at that place. :)
Can't wait to see color!