Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Redos and corrections



Thanks to everyone for the critiques on this illustration. I made a much of changes and hopefully this piece is much stronger now. Not completely satisfied, but have to stop working on it at some point. Thanks again.

6 comments:

pete said...

Looks great, Steve!

It's an impressive illustration!

Christy said...

Wow! I am impressed. The lighting is great, the characters complete...call it done. :)

Carmen Keys said...

Awesome, Steve! Good call on the lady's dress too... ;) This will be a great promo piece for you!

Isaac Marzioli - Freelance Illustrator said...

Hey! You made some great changes! The Magicians arms are terrific! And I like the change in the woman's arm and dress! Oh, and the rabbit with the flowers! Great job!

My only thing now is with the girl's eye - her left eye has shadow in it...I understand why (backlighting) but even when blown up she sort of looks cross eyed...but it's only because the shadow makes it look like her eyes are at two different levels...I wonder if you could lighten that shadow because if it's not so similar in tone to the eye color, maybe it won't have that optical illusion...

Anyhow - great job, and good luck with this promo!

sara.b said...

Oh man Steve, this is awesome! I placed both next to each other and what a difference! All of the changes you made are right on, critical, and made the piece just have solid ground.

Awesome! Just awesome!!!! :D

Lara Lakshmi said...

Sorry I missed critiqueing the original version. I went back and read the comments, and compared your two images - the process felt like a mini-tutorial. Thanks, everyone. What a GREAT promo piece, Steve. You have to do postcards of this one!