This was supposed to be the back of the postcard, but the more I work on it, the more I think it might want to go on the front...what do you think? And, more importantly, what do you think of the drawing? Is it solid?
The bottom half is really solid in construction. The perspective is nicely done. I'd watch some of the rows of bricks. Some are thinner than others.
The top part is more confusing. I know what is going on, the panda is stuck on a power line. I would take out the tree on the right and make a telephone pole with a birds nest and some birds looking puzzled. I just think it would help the image to read more instantly.
Also think about the weight of the panda versus the parachute. Might want more chute behind the panda for weight distribution.
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Solid! I really like it.
Very solid...I might suggest a larger spread on the chute...if I remember the other one was pretty large.
Love the expression on the lower one's face.
The bottom half is really solid in construction. The perspective is nicely done. I'd watch some of the rows of bricks. Some are thinner than others.
The top part is more confusing. I know what is going on, the panda is stuck on a power line. I would take out the tree on the right and make a telephone pole with a birds nest and some birds looking puzzled. I just think it would help the image to read more instantly.
Also think about the weight of the panda versus the parachute. Might want more chute behind the panda for weight distribution.
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