So here's the finished comp for the back of the postcard. i put it all together, but have each element separate so it can be moved around. I originally had my website under my name - but it just got too muddled, so I moved it into the tree to, hopefully, have it stand out from the rest.
And I did the two drawings as if they were two separate illustrations because I wanted to show on the back of the card that I could do the spot illustrations as well as the full page ones....so I don't know if that helps with deciding which direction to go with the grass...
2 comments:
sorry i missed the initial crits. i think it looks great now.
had you considered moving the blue guy and the squirrel, and tree over to the lower right corner? the composition of that makes a nice reverse "L" shape that could frame that edge nicely. then you could "flip" or mirror the white guy running away, terrified from the swarm to the mid/upper right corner.
just a thought. oh, and i like the lower version of the grass better.
the characters look great, as always!
Isaac- the placement looks great and I like the movement you have going on. The only suggestion that I might add is that I wish there was a little color pop somewhere- very subjective comment as I love color, and I know that you often use a more muted palette, but it's a thought you might consider. Possibly making the squirrel orange or the tummy of the kitten a little brighter.
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