Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Something not quite right with this

Hi, everyone! So I've been getting my Masters and this is for a Graphic Design Project due soon.
Basically we have to use Illustrator and create an illustrated page as if from a book. This one is heavily influenced by one artist from dA, btw.

It's not finished yet, but there is something off that I can't put my finger on. I'd really appreciate your help! (The house is an eyesore, I know.)

1 comment:

nicbrek said...

Hi Kris I saw your illustration and believe the focal point (the wolf) competes a bit with the gradient background for attention. I would change the glow at the hillside to something simpler. Hope this helps.