tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7431959384106363963.post5246333178706831206..comments2023-05-04T05:24:56.079-05:00Comments on the illustration board: IF: Poise - AdeliaSara Burrierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18437648523355710788noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7431959384106363963.post-70889315468908184802009-03-27T15:16:00.000-05:002009-03-27T15:16:00.000-05:00Hey, Isaac.I enjoy your choice in vantage point. ...Hey, Isaac.<BR/><BR/>I enjoy your choice in vantage point. I like the "worm's eye view," because it feels interesting and I don't see this view very often.<BR/><BR/>I also feel that the character is balance within the composition. The tightrope and balance bar angles create nice movement in the piece. I could also see moving Adelia down on the page and revealing more sky but I don't know if it's necessary. I DO know that I like what you have as it is.<BR/><BR/>Quick things that I noticed were differing arm/hand sizes and a lack of joint movement in Adelia's right thigh...that leg feels rigid to me.<BR/><BR/>Also, I think that leaving this amount of open sky might make the overall image feel kinda empty. Indicating treetops or birds might help to fill it in a bit.<BR/><BR/>Glad to see Adelia is enjoying her high-risk sports!petehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03518866768025044150noreply@blogger.com