tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7431959384106363963.post4483891826234320697..comments2023-05-04T05:24:56.079-05:00Comments on the illustration board: Animals plantingSara Burrierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18437648523355710788noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7431959384106363963.post-49743711509115610512009-04-23T13:50:00.000-05:002009-04-23T13:50:00.000-05:00I agree, I think this works great and it's definit...I agree, I think this works great and it's definitely a dose of cute! I adore your pillow guys and find their interaction and expressions working very well. It comes so naturally.<br /><br />Another idea you could use is maybe add grass lines on the horizon line. I think that's one thing that is missing in your work...that horizon line is so flat. And the dirt when detailing could add a bit more shape. Maybe break it down into a few circles or ovals and shade each one so it doesn't look like chocolate ice cream. ;) <br /><br />Small things, but over all I am totally enjoying it!sara.bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18218871506380758529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7431959384106363963.post-78769698429668435982009-04-22T17:47:00.000-05:002009-04-22T17:47:00.000-05:00Looking pretty good, Isaac! Compositionally I thi...Looking pretty good, Isaac! Compositionally I think it's working pretty well, though maybe a bit sparse. I'll bet more detail and shading would help that tons though, so I don't necessarily think it needs anything big added before you go into the details. On the left cloud the gradient line is a little abrupt. <br />Pillow guys are cute as ever, I like their expressions (looks like hard work carrying that tree!) and they have a good sense of interaction and what will come next in the story.Carmen Medlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06261522131619502155noreply@blogger.com